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my personal physician my doctor
reiterated over and over again repeated
thunderstorm activity thunderstorm
until such time as until
weather event snow (rain, etc.)
Tinh sue tich (conciseness) dtfdc dilng de chi mot bai viet rach r6i vii
dung trong tam. Nhtf vay khong phai de noi la ban phai cdt bdt tat ca
nhffng phan mieu ta, tu tff va hinh ttfdng. Khong dau. Thay vi vay, <j n^y
muon noi ring bai viet dai dong van tff se khien ngtfdi doc thay btfc boi vl
no khien ho phai bang qua ca rtfng cau trtfdc khi hieu dtfdc y ban muon
ndi gi. Be viet dtfdc cau sue tich va an ttfdng doi hoi ban phai no ltfc hdn
nhieu so vdi viec viet cau dai dong va roi rdm. May mdn la dpc gid se
danh gia cao no lffc dd cua ban.
Ba cdch vifa cdu sue tich
Hay lam theo cac quy tac sau de viet dtfdc cau ngdn gon \$l an ttfdng.
1. Loai bo nhtfng ttf va cum ttf khong can thiet.
2. Ket hdp nhffng cau lap y.
3. Dffng ndi hai lan ve cung mot sff viec.
Ta hay xem xet tffng quy tdc mot cach ky cang hdn.
1. Loai bo nhffng tff va cum tff khong can thiet.
Tff lap cho (filler words) la tff hoiic cum tff rong chdng them dffdc gi
cho cau cua ban. Ttf lap cho dtfdc dilng de trim nhffng cho trong va
khien bai viet nghe co ve “trinh trong”. Khong may la nhieu ttf lap cho
da trd nen binh thtfdng tdi mtfc ta chap nhan coi no la mot phan cua loi
viet hieu qua. Vi ttf lap cho khong dtfdc hay nen viec loai bo cic ttf n&y
khoi van ban la rat quan trong. Bdi cac tff do gay khd chiu nen hay nghi
rdng no lffc bo di loai tff nay cung giong nhff lam viec cong ich de dat
dffdc mot bai viet tot!
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