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(b) Lefty Williams, Eddie Cicotte, and J. Jackson ad­
mitted they were in on the scam when it took almost a
year for them to sign confessions admitting the series
had been fixed.
(c) Since it took almost a year for Lefty Williams, Eddie
Cicotte, and J. Jackson to sign confessions admitting
the series had been fixed, they admitted they were in
on the scam.
(d) It took almost a year for Lefty Williams, Eddie
Cicotte, and J. Jackson to sign confessions admitting
the series had been fixed; however, the men admitted
they were in on the scam.
9. Which revision best combines ideas?
The water declined. The freshwater bird population has
declined more than 90 percent since the early 1900s.
(a) The freshwater bird population has declined more
than 90 percent since the early 1900s and the water
declined.
(b) The water declined because the freshwater bird
population has declined more than 90 percent since the
early 1900s.
(c) The water declined, but the freshwater bird popula­
tion has declined more than 90 percent since the early
1900s.
(d) As a result of the declining water, the freshwater
bird population has declined more than 90 percent since
the early 1900s.

10. Which revision best combines ideas?
There are still ample physical reminders of the history
of the Native Americans in Florida. Impressive burial
mounds, dating back hundreds of years, can be found
along many of the rivers, for instance.
(a) Impressive burial mounds, dating back hundreds of
years, can be found along many of the rivers, for in­

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